I choose to review Jenny Mockford's technical writing exercise. First off I would like to say she did a very good job of rewriting the paper. She condensed the information into a form that was easy to read and understand. She took out a lot of unneeded words and restructured the entire paper. It flows rather well and it really gets to the point. Each point is no longer than two lines and explains what has to be done step by step.
below is her writing
Technical writing exercise
Creating Shared Drives under Windows 95 for Network Multi-users
To install a program on a network server for the purpose of allowing access to others, it is necessary to set up a shared drive. Please follow the steps listed below to correctly install the network application.
1.) Confirm the name of the server for the program.
2.) Users with a Windows Desktop need to select the Windows Explore icon.
3.) Once the Windows Explore screen has a appeared, look for the scroll arrow labeled Drive.
4.) Select a letter of the alphabet to represent the network application and insert into Drive box.
5.) Choose a path for your application in the scroll-down menu of the Path box.
6.) Confirm that the “Reconnect at Log-on” box is checked.
7.) Click OK to save this information.
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